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Bri Stokes's avatar

Oooh, I really liked this! So sensual, and you perfectly articulated the passion of the scene. I could feel the tension👏🏽

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Kitty Killer's avatar

Thank you so much for reading and responding! Erotic writing leaves me feeling so exposed, it's nice to hear that it's landing. I guess it's good to grow comfortable with that vulnerable feeling as a writer too

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Bri Stokes's avatar

It’s definitely landing, and yes, it’s good practice! 🖤

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